Tuesday, 23 December 2025

About my novel 'Revenant Stars'

 


                                                       The truth behind the Little Mermaid


                   The inspiration behind my novel 'Revenant Stars' was Fromsoft's 2023 video-game master- piece, Armored Core 6: The Fires of Rubicon.  The final edited version I have today,  is the fourth draft, after two years of trying to write this. 


                   I was trying to write a modern day ever green classic, a la 'The Great Gatsby', but an Asian  version, set against a 21st century backdrop of a prevalence of K-pop culture and the rise of China

                        

                    And on a deeper level, I was writing 'Revenant Stars' as carthasis for my own mental health issues (vocies in my head, etc) and personal rejection. 


                    I am an under-writer who writes punchy short sentences that hit the jugular, and I weave in many issues of the day into my side plots and side characters. 


                   'Revenant Stars' is basically written in Brandon Sanderson's crisp, clean style of writing,  whilst incorporating Jane Austen character analysis for certain important characters. (character interioirty and inner dialogue) 


                    I hope you enjoy reading "Revenant Stars' as much as I enjoyed writing it, in between  documentation and system analysis detection (my day job is a cyber-security professional) 

Friday, 19 December 2025

Progression 20th Dec 2025



                                                          AC6 Gameplay Reveiw 


  Early in the morning of 20th Dec 2025, it's done. 


  Chapters: 40 / 40

 

  Word Count: 52,150 / 50,000 


  'Revenant Stars' is done. Even the 5 appendices are completed too. 

   (Note word count doesnt count words from the appendices) 

  

   Imma set it aside and edit it more a lil later. 


  Mean time I will rest, exercise, sleep, and think about the sequel to this novel. 

Wednesday, 17 December 2025

18th Dec 2025 Progression

                  

                                           Lecture on the real meaning of the Wizard of Oz


            Today is the 18th of Dec 2025. In a week, it will be Xmas '25


            How time flies. 

             

             Progression of my book 'Revenant Stars' 


             Chapter: 40/40

             Word Count: 51,130 / 50,000 


              I've edited a lot. Even completed 4 out of 5 appendices. 


              Imma take a break now, I have quite the tension headache. 


               

Sunday, 14 December 2025

Sample Chapter

 

                                   

                                                     The truth behind Alice in Wonderland

  

Chapter 4

 “You can do it…I believe in you.”

   A tearful face. A rough hand on his cheek.

  Victory carried the memory with him like a scar. When the black shuttle came, and the Sisters of Mercy waved their handheld Void dosimeters over the children, a high positive Void Coefficient flashed on the screen for Victory.

  “Positive 85…” The stern face veiled in a black cowl, body draped in black Zaku-Ten silk, was stunned by the number.

  “Come along, little boy. You’re special.”

   Victory could vaguely recall, his mother bidding him farewell. He could also remember seeing his father, surrounded by a gaggle of his brothers and sisters, and his father’s eyes flickering an artificial electric blue, as the corporate executives accompanying the Sisters of Mercy wirelessly transferred a significant amount of Terran credits to their family.

  The hand he held was scaly and wrinkled. He could still remember the harsh tang of the incense hanging on the Sister of Mercy, who led him onto the black shuttle waiting for him.

  “WAIT! WHAT ABOUT MY SON? TAKE MY SON TOO!”

  “Your son is hardly anything special. His Void Coefficient is positive 25. How painfully average.” The Sister of Mercy said dismissively, waving the mother of the other child away.

   Victory was the only child from his slum selected by the Sisters of Mercy. When the black shuttle roared into the sky, the final memory Victory had of his home, was of the trash-filled river, and decrepit home-steads shrinking into nothingness. And of the wretched people waving from a distance, whose memory served as a burning ember, when things grew dark.

    ****

 Victory…Over here.”

 “Victory…I’m here….”

   BANG BANG BANG!

   Victory jolted awake. From the dream of haunting whispers and pulsating indigo light.

  “Victory? You have a visitor.”

  “Yes, Aunt Lily.”

    Victory opened the door. Standing next to the short stout figure of the dormitory matron, who had looked after him and his fellow rookies all their lives, was a tall figure in OBC uniform. 

   “General Dante Shaw. Sir. It is pleasure to see you here.” Victory snapped to attention, and saluted Dante.

   “At ease, pilot.”  Dante paused, to give Victory a once-over. Pale skin stretched tightly over taut muscles, raven hair wild, bulging eyes blazed with a restless fire.

   “Victory…that’s not your real name, is it? How did you come to be known as Victory?”

   “Because in all the academic competitions, all the capture-the-flag tournaments, I always led my team to a convincing win. Thus, I came to be known as ‘Victory’, sir.” Victory replied, a tinge of pride in his voice, hands clasped behind his back.

   Dante stared Victory straight in the eye. “But you didn’t lead your team to victory during the Tartarus exercise, did you, Victory?”

   “My team-mate made the ultimate sacrifice. I will forever be grateful to her. But it was my high positive Void Coefficient that allowed me to survive that simulation, sir.”

   Dante sighed, and rubbed a hand over his face.

  “It’s true. The psychic and psychological stress of piloting a VANTAR is so great, even a practice simulation could prove fatal. Having a high positive Void Coefficient counts for much. Do you know how you came to have such a high Void Coefficient?”

  “I don’t know sir. I was born in a slum outside Neo-Gyureong Do. That’s all I know.”

  “Neo-Gyureong Do…” Dante heard of the place. It was well-known for being the location of many a kichijon on Mars. He wondered who Victory’s father really was. But he cast all extraneous thoughts aside, and looked at Victory.

 “Time is short. I shall be brief. I was impressed by your performance against Tartarus. I’d like to promote you to the ranks of the Silver Foxes.”

 “Thank you, sir, I’m honoured.” Victory straightened, and stood a little stiffer. A faint smile crept along the corners of his lips.

  “There is no time for the usual induction. The recent ambush by Sino-Tech gutted the ranks of the Silver Foxes. Only Gravity Dragon and Golden Sun are left, and even those VANTARs are in need of serious repair and maintenance. The pilots of those VANTARs are currently recuperating in hospital. We need you to pilot an experimental VANTAR, code-named X, to complete a mission of utmost importance.”

  “Now…sir?” Victory looked alarmed. Beside Dante, Aunt Lily looked sad and surprised at the sudden news as well.

  “Yes, now. Pack your things. You shall move to the Silver Foxes Barracks, today. I will wait for you at docking bay 94.”

  “Yes sir.”

    Dante moved to leave, but spun on his heel to ask one last question.

  “I had a peek at your file. My memory fails me. I can’t seem to recall your real name. What is your real name, Victory?”

      “Song Hyun, sir.  Lee Song Hyun.”

  “Victory sounds much better.” Dante turned, and left, leaving Victory to pack his things.

   ****

  “Victory?”

   “Yes, Aunt Lily?” Victory turned around. His bag was fully packed, and he was about to leave for the docking bay.

   “You’ll probably have some fancy professional chef cooking for you at the Silver Foxes Barracks. You’ll forget about me in no time. But here’s some food for the journey.”

   Aunt Lily held a tin towards Victory. He accepted it with a grateful nod. Even without his psychic abilities, Victory knew what was inside: At the top level, his favourite seaweed and tofu soup. In the middle level, breaded pork cutlets with curry, and at the bottom level, warm white rice. A spoon was latched at the top of the tin, everything was prepared for Victory’s immediate consumption.

  “No professional chef, no professional cleaning crew could ever replace you, Aunt Lily. You were the bedrock of our dorm, amidst the harsh discipline of the Sisters, and the VANTAR instructors. My fellow recruits and I wouldn’t have survived a day without your love and care.” 

   “Yes. Now go. You don’t want to keep the general waiting.”

   “Farewell, Aunt Lily. Take care.”

    As Victory left, he could hear faint sobbing behind him.

     ****

 


Progress 15th Dec 2025


                                                                The world needs bad men



As of 15th Dec 2025, Im 95% done


Chapters: 38/40 

Word Count: 48K/ 50K 


I've started work on a number of Appendices to expand the world in my book Revenant Stars, and to explain certain things that I don't expand on in the novel


Following a schedule has meant I got a lotta things done, since Nov1st. 



Thursday, 4 December 2025

5th Dec 2025 Progress Report

 

                                   Brandon Sanderson 5 writing tips for your 1st novel


Today 5th Dec 2025.  Instead of resting, like I said in my previous posts, I ended up writing.


Current Progression: 

30/ 40 chapters

36K out of 50K words. 


In terms of chapters, I am 75% done. 

In terms of hitting a 50K word target, I fall a little short. 

Perhaps the Time-line history and appendices I plan on adding, will help boost my word count 


I had been editing a lot, and in the process of editing I was inspired to write, so I did write. 


Brandon Sanderson is a great lecturer in writing. I do reccommend him to all aspiring writers. 

About my novel 'Revenant Stars'

                                                          The truth behind the Little Mermaid                       The inspiration behind m...